Some stuff:
Difficulty descriptions:
Sweet;
Suitable for beginner shmup players.
Normal;
Suitable for casual shmup players.
Bitter;
Suitable for veteran shmup players.
Black;
For those who don't know the meaning of sugar.
Partner descriptions:
For Hitbox it needs to say Medium, not Middle, for Sugarless and Arthur's.
Souffle;
Change to:
Attack with bone bullets that will home in on the nearest enemy.
Sugarless;
Change to:
Front-focus type with broadsword bullets that can penetrate through enemies.
(Don't forget to add a period at the end of all the Partner descriptions, you forgot them at the end of all the last sentences. Same for the difficulty descriptions.)
Some more text pointers:
1.
Ouch... What are you, sir? A criminal?
Change to:
Ouch... Sir, what are you? A criminal? (maybe wait for me to edit this again tomorrow about this one lol)
2.
Aside from that I think there still needs to be an actual sentence closer mark in the lines where a music note is used.
A suggestion to line up the text for "Continue?" and Quit game?
And maybe make it "Quit Game?" with a capitol for Game, not just quit. Basically right now it looks like the font size might even be different, and going back and forth between the options looks off.
That's all for now!